Instead of: "Canterbury Tales gives readers insight into his purpose for writing through subject matter, tone, and characterization techniques."
a better introduction paragraph would be: Chaucer's ground breaking poem satirized the upper class to relate and write towards all people. The subject matter, tone, and characterization techniques are literary elements that give the audience an insight into the purpose of the story.
I feel like this thesis statement would work better because it sounds better than something a Jr. High student would write.
Please comment any tips or suggestions so that I can improve my thesis statements :)
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